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Looking for Criticism.. Kinetic Law Site

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  • Looking for Criticism.. Kinetic Law Site

    Posted 14 years 4 months ago
    • I am very much a "newbie" and very open to some serious constructive criticism. This is a site I created (using the Kinetic theme) for my brother... who just opened a new solo law practice.

      www.womerlaw.com

      Would welcome your ideas to make it a better, professional site....

      Thanks in advance.

      Dave
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    Re: Looking for Criticism.. Kinetic Law Site

    Posted 14 years 4 months ago
    • Nicely done!

      I didn't check every page / link, but on the contact page, you should fix this...

      Please fill out the form below to email us or simply click on this link to use use your own email program. Thank you.

      An extra set of eyes is always helpful when proofing copy or content you've posted.

      Best of luck to both you and your brother. :D
    • Thanks,
      jim
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  • Re: Looking for Criticism.. Kinetic Law Site

    Posted 14 years 4 months ago
    • Thanks JEM. Amazing that no one mentioned that before.

      Anyone else have some constructive criticism?
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    Re: Looking for Criticism.. Kinetic Law Site

    Posted 14 years 4 months ago
    • That's a really nice looking site. I have always thought the Kinetic theme to be a bit difficult to truly customize and set it apart, but you have done quite nicely with it.

      One suggestion: try replacing the default Kinetic showcase background image with the law firm's "W" logo.

      Here is the link on their server:

      www.womerlaw.com/templates/rt_kinetic_j1...in/rokstories-bg.png

      Jeff
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    Re: Looking for Criticism.. Kinetic Law Site

    Posted 14 years 4 months ago
    • Too much unused white space under "Dedicated to providing individual focus with honesty, integrity and results."

      Wrap the text around the images to give a cleaner look on your linked pages.

      The logo might look better reduced on the navigation bar so that again you don't have so much white space.

      I do like the look and these are personal preferences.
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    Re: Looking for Criticism.. Kinetic Law Site

    Posted 14 years 4 months ago
    • I like your site. I've always been a fan of the kinetic template and like to see what others have done with it.

      The only recommendation I have for you is to reduce the introtext that appears in the rokstories module. It looks too busy and takes too long to read.
      I had to force myself to read it and the slide changed before I could complete each one. Give the reader a concise hook to make them want to click on 'Read More'.

      I agree with JeffShin: the W logo would look awesome in the rokstories background.
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  • Re: Looking for Criticism.. Kinetic Law Site

    Posted 14 years 3 months ago
    • Thanks all..good stuff.
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