Dubjective wrote:
Great start paul!
I think it would be cool if you could add another horizontal section in your website to give it a little more length personally.
I would also add a Newletter sign up in a footer, your Testimonials more prominent on the front page, and if possible add a video to the front page as well.
Other than that, STRONG START, and im lookin forward to seein how it does
Awesome start so far, but I would love to give you my opinion as well!
1) Suggestion 1
I am going to have to agree 100% with this. You need to add at least two more hortizontal sections with some calls to actions, as well as some content that sells yourself as a magician. (refer to a different template for ideas)
2) Suggestion 2
Under the horizontal section where you offer a button to request a quote, you have 3 sections including a Weddings, Corporate and Parties. You need to write at least two sentences selling yourself or including a Call to Action.
On those pages (Wedd, Corp, Parties) make sure you at least have 2 internal links as well as minimum one solid high PR external link i in relation to the pages keywords in order to improve your SEO.
3) SOCIAL NETWORKING!
Simply put, you do not make it easy for others to connect with you Soccialy. If you don't have one, make a Twitter, Facebook, and Instraram at the very least (Insta would help your parties and exposure in your field as well). This will also benefit your SEO as well and provide more high PR backlnks to your website. Depending on what you are most active on will influence this this most!
I see the buttons you added but they blend in with the site almost TOO WELL and don't benefit you. Add something to a footer section, and find a place to add it in AT LEAST ONE of the new horizontal sections I HIGHLY SUGGEST you add. IT WILL ONLY HELP YOU! Also, you could add some more better buttons to the front page or even a Facebook and/or Twitter stream!
You have a great start and I hope my advice helped a little. LEt me know if I can help more!
dub
PS!
I would also reccomend including a footer in addition to your initial META with the location of your actual business so engines will associate your page with listings faster. - Google+ for Business and Maps, Yelp, and all that jazz.