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- Arifin FinLy
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Hello GollumX, YouYou, and Dave G,
Thank you for all of your great comments. The nice typography and the Slimbox from Elixer give me some inspiration and I use them into my site.
You're right Dave, I need to check and fix the wrong grammar in the site. My friend helped me with many of the contents. But, both of us are not English speakers.. We will try hard to re-correct all.
Thank you very much for this correction.
Best Regards,
Arifin FinLy
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- Sean Aikins
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- Arifin FinLy
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CodeZero wrote:
Yeah it looks really great Arifin! Congrats!
Thank you, CodeZero
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Hi Arifin,
I really like your site and, as everyone else who commented, think it's a great design. The structure has a high visual impact and the information is concise and to the point. I can easily learn about what your business does and that's good.
The only thing I found I had to get used to was that *all* the top menu items lead me to a page that has the large graphic in the main part of the site and that the submenu is at the bottom of the graphic. Visually it looks good, however, it is not what I expect (except on the home page). This is a minor thing anyway but usability evangelists would probably have a word or two to say about this .
As someone else pointed out, the text does need some proof-reading by a native english speaker. I would make that no. 1 on my list of ToDo things to correct on the site. You are striving for professionalism and excellence and you have achieved that with your clean design. Now you only have to correct the grammar and spelling and you're sorted.
Good Luck with your business.
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- Arifin FinLy
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Sjoerd wrote:
Congrats !!! - Outstanding.
Whish I could do so!
Make it your profession! Almost as good as Andy (or maby better?
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Keep up the good work
Sjoerd
Hello Sjoerd,
Thank you for the comment. My site will not exist without Andy. Andy's template is the best.
Best Regards,
Arifin FinLy
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- Arifin FinLy
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phlux0r wrote:
Hi Arifin,
I really like your site and, as everyone else who commented, think it's a great design. The structure has a high visual impact and the information is concise and to the point. I can easily learn about what your business does and that's good.
The only thing I found I had to get used to was that *all* the top menu items lead me to a page that has the large graphic in the main part of the site and that the submenu is at the bottom of the graphic. Visually it looks good, however, it is not what I expect (except on the home page). This is a minor thing anyway but usability evangelists would probably have a word or two to say about this .
As someone else pointed out, the text does need some proof-reading by a native english speaker. I would make that no. 1 on my list of ToDo things to correct on the site. You are striving for professionalism and excellence and you have achieved that with your clean design. Now you only have to correct the grammar and spelling and you're sorted.
Good Luck with your business.
Hello Phlux0r,
Thank you very much for your great response, comment, and positive critics. I very appreciate it. You're right about the large visual impact. Instead of writing many (English) sentences, which is very difficult for us, we decide to display a big picture with short (to the point) sentences for the pages.
About the English grammar, we realized that it need to be fixed soon. We have put it on the TODO list, but no.1 on our list is our client's project. As soon as we accomplished all the client's projects, we will update the page and correct the grammar.
Thank you again for your comment, Phlux0r.
Best Regards,
Arifin FinLy
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- rccummings
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Like everyone else that has commented, great job! that is a wonderful tweak to versatility. like a second-cousin or something!
if you'd like, i volunteer to proof your material if you need assistance. consider it my contribution to the community due to my lack of coding skills
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- Arifin FinLy
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rccummings wrote:
Like everyone else that has commented, great job! that is a wonderful tweak to versatility. like a second-cousin or something!
if you'd like, i volunteer to proof your material if you need assistance. consider it my contribution to the community due to my lack of coding skills
Hello rccummings,
Thank you for your comment to my site. I also very happy and appreciate you for your kind help.
Please send me a pm.
Thank you.
Best Regards,
Arifin FinLy
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