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- Kat05
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My first ever Joomla site - Would you believe
Template used: Vortex - heavily modified
Additional Extensions: RokSlideShow, AB Calendar, Easy Comment, Easy Guestbook
Content: About Straight Egyptian Arabian Horses
Additional Comments: Any feedback more than welcome!
Greetings Kat - Kat05 / QA Lead & Support / Germany
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- JEM
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No, I wouldn't believe it unless you told me James S was your brother...
Just took a quick look....
I'm weird, so if a had things my way, I'd change 'All-the-pretty-horses.com' to 'all-the-pretty-horses.com'
Using the URL as the name for the page is a cool way to imprint the name of your site on visitors, especially if there are dashed between the words. Don't make them think the 'a' has to be an 'A'. A lowercase 'a' might look nice...
You are an Arabian Horse Judge and would like to be featured on this website?
You are an Arabian Horse Trainer and would like to be featured on this website?
'You are...' should be 'Are you...'
Literature: you suggest many books, how about links, don't make your users search for something you suggest, put it at their fingertips.
Anyway, just a few comments, and yes, I'd love some coffee.... - Thanks,
jim
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- Kat05
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Hey, thanks so much for your comments
James my brother??? I wish!!! ;D
The 'a' issue is really something for me to think about, i might actually consider doing it your way...
Thanks for the grammar check, English is not my first language, so I am always happy to put things right. Will change it tomorrow.
I am planning an online shop soon, with arabian horse books and stuff, so then I hope to get rid of that boring literature list.
Let me know if you have any more ideas!
What about sugar and milk?
Just notice now, it should be: want some coke? instead of want some coffee? because I like mine extra sweet with tons of milk! - Kat05 / QA Lead & Support / Germany
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