Hi, this is the last of my choice using Hyperion template
I wish you can give me your suggestion
Site Name: Bali Web Design & Web Hosting services
URL/Link:
balipublisher.com
Extensions: module yoologin, Mod JaNews, CB, Artio SEF
Template: Hyperion
Very Thanks to RocketTheme for this nice template....
Very clean, professional, uncluttered layout; well-done!
It did fire a 'syntax error' browsing with IE, though...and perhaps make the "P" red in the "Full Flash Web" slider? The rest of the sections have the red 1st word drop-text or what ever it called, but not that one.
Good job I like your site, it looks good but I have a few critiques below - i hope you can take it : ]
You are missing a marketing message/call to action. I see tons of web hosting and design companies every day, I actually work for one.
Your message about a free domain name is hidden! You should throw that on top where its visible, give people a real incentive in buying or using your services. With a click here to register your domain name now. Make sure the button is big and says Free Domain Click Here.
Also, the top looks fuzzy. My suggestion is adding some pictures, banner, or taking out the text and having an image with a short blurb like web hosting, ecommerce, and etc...
Otherwise I like the internal pages better than the home page, they are layed out very well. My question to you is, what can you do to make me click on a link and view the rest of your site?
Thank for your good critiques, its very useful. For this time we are still developing this site, because we recently upgrade from joomla 1.0xx into 1.53.
We have planning as your critiques, and also we must consider put more text than images for better download.
many thanks.. i always need more suggestion from user this forum.